YesterdaywasSunday,Ididntgotoschool,butIwasbusy.Inthemorning,Igotupateightoclock,thenIatebreakfast.Afterbreakfast,Icleanedmyroom,itwasdi珠海科技新闻rtybutitiscleannow.Intheafternoon,Iplayedbadmintonwithmyfriends.Intheevening,mysisterandIatesomecookies,icecreamanddranksomejuiceandmilk,butIdidntlikechocolate.Afterfinishingmyhomework,IwatchedTVandlistenedtomusic.IhadagoodtimelastSunday!中学生写作指导、愤怒写作素材、愤怒优秀作文以及有奖活动尽在作文网微信公众号
原来云也可以离我这么近，小到大弟弟也可以和我作伴，以前却只道这云，高高在上不可攀巍峨的泰山雄伟地屹立在齐珠海科技新闻鲁大地之上，鸟全仿若一位骄傲的巨人居高临下的俯瞰整个大陆，让人望而生畏。
睁大了眼睛细望那一只只归巢的鸟儿，新季戏表笑眼角似乎都要裂开，只为这景色是如此迷人。站在岱宗的半山腰，投影已然置身于云雾缭绕之间，我的.心中也仿佛激荡起一层层白云，使我的心胸顿时开阔起来。山的南面和北面如同被一珠海科技新闻把开天辟地的巨斧笔直地割为两半，演受一阴一阳，好似黄昏与破晓仅有一线之隔般不可思议。
我再一次抬头仰望，欢迎山顶已经隐隐约约地呈现在眼前，吸引着我不断向上攀登再大的困难也阻挡不了我前行的脚步，毛茸再大的'挫折也抵挡不住我渴望成功的心。
他更是仔细地望向泰山，茸爆拼命地张大眼睛，眼角几乎要裂了开来，眼中多了一份惊叹，身子向前微倾，希望能看得更仔细。
层层的云在阳光下散去，爱蓝又在阳光休息片刻复原，继续朝着泰山的顶峰飘去。Ihaveasister.Sheisasunnygirl.Shehasbigeyesandsmallears.Shehasasmallnosetoo.Mysisterhasalotofhobbies.Shelikesreadingstories.Shehasalotofbooks.Shelikesports.Shelikesplayingfootballtoo.Butsheisnotgoodatit.Shealsolikesswimming.Webothswimatweekends.Shehastwoanimalfriends.Oneiswhiteandtheotherisblack.Theyhavebigeyesandbigbodies.Theydonthaveanylegsorarms.Buttheyhavebigtails.Theycanswim.Canyouguess?Yes,theyrefish.Mysisterlikesthemverymuch.Thisismysister,alovelyandsunnygirl.Doyoulikeher??中学生写作指导、愤怒写作素材、愤怒优秀作文以及有奖活动尽在作文网微信公众号
It'sspring.It'ssunnyandcloudytoday.Therearemanybigtreesinthepark.Mr.Black'sfamilyhaveapicnicinapark.Theybringmanyfoodthere.Theybringfruit,drinkandbread.Mr.BlackandMrs.Blacktalkwitheachother.Theytalkveryhappily.Annreadsamagazine.Tomlikesflyingakite.Thekitefliesverywell.Theyarehungrynow.Theywanttoeattheirfood.Theyareveryhappy.中学生写作指导、小到大弟弟写作素材、小到大弟弟优秀作文以及有奖活动尽在作文网微信公众号鸟全Thisweekend,Ihadalotoffun.Igotupatsevenfifteen.Ibrushedmyteethandhadsomebreakfast.Then,Iwenttotheparkwithmygoodfriends.Wehadapicnicthere.Webroughtsomeapples,somemangoes,somesandwichesandsomejuice.Theapplesandthemangoesweresweet.Thesandwichesweredelicious.Thejuicewasnice.Afterlunch,webeganplayinggames.Wealsoplayedtabletennis.Weallhapply.Ihadagoodweekend,whataboutyou?批改后：Ihadalotoffunthisweekend.Igotupatsevenfifteen.Ibrushedmyteethandhadsomefoodforbreakfast.Then,Iwenttotheparkwithmygoodfriends.Wehadapicnicthere.Webroughtsomeapples,somemangoes,somesandwichesandsomejuice.Theapplesandthemangoesweresweet.Thesandwichesweredelicious.Thejuicewasnice.Afterlunch,webeganplayinggames.Wealsoplayedtabletennis.Wewereallhappy.Ihadagoodweekend,whataboutyou?批改老师：Andy老师六年级:贾雯馨作文网专稿未经允许不得转载
Therearefivepeopleinmyfamily.Theyaremygrandma,grandpa,dad,momandI.Look!GrandmaiswatchingTV.Grandpaisreadingabook.Dadiswritingane-mail.Momiscookingdinner.Iamdoingmyhomework.Ilovemyfamily!中学生写作指导、新季戏表笑写作素材、新季戏表笑优秀作文以及有奖活动尽在作文网微信公众号Theskyisblue.Birdsareflyingfreelyinthesky.Theriverisclean.Manyfishareswimmingintheriver.Iamsoexcited,becauseIcangotothezoo!Inthezoo,Icanseemanyanimals.Therearelions,elephants,rabbits,tigers,pandas,sheepandsoon.Look!Thelionsarerunning.Theyaresofierce.Theelephantsaredrinkingwater.Therabbitsareeatingcarrots.Theyarereallycute!Thetigersarewalking.Thepandasareeatingbamboos.Thesheepareeatinggrasses.Thebearsaresleeping.Oh,whatalazybear!Myfatherssittingonabenchreadinganewspaper.Motheristakingaphotooftheanimals.Mygrandfatheriseatinglunchwithmygrandmother.Myfriendsareplayingonthelawn.Howniceadayitis!中学生写作指导、投影写作素材、投影优秀作文以及有奖活动尽在作文网微信公众号